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This time I've come further than I ever thought possible;
I've crossed mountains and ocean without being sensible.
If I dreamed to be near you, well, I missed that by miles,
and this new world I've seen seems to keep me from your smile.
I know I once had dreams, once had ambitions that tried to thrive,
but just as I am scared to die, I am also to be alive.

Protruding from my heart are those things that I hold dear,
yet always there is something that quickly feeds my fears.
I want to be beside you, want to feel your breath on skin
(for it is only when I know you are real that Eros may begin).
Still, I know I once had dreams, once thought I had it all,
but just as I am scared to love, I am also scared to fall.
©2007-2009 ~angelsarefascists
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Author's Comments

3/25/07. What it is to be afraid of making your move.

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:iconash4love:
Very melancholic, but definitely beautiful. I understand the feeling and it is hard to get over. I'm still scared to try new things. Hopefully this changes for you though! :hug:

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"Our doubts are traitors, and make us lose the good we oft might win, by fearing to attempt" William Shakespeare
:icondrayned-voodoo:
Wow. I think I found a new favorite.
It was beautiful. Very smooth and flowing.
<33

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I found Jimmy Hoffa in my closet.
:iconsoulstealer69:
Wonderful DAR-LING! lol I MISS YOU!!!!!! tootles (heart) *K*
:icondanomac86:
Nice work.

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Perspective is everything.
:iconxbravemountainx:
Beautiful, heartfelt and true. Also enjoyed the smoothness of the form. ^_~

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The mind, once expanded to the dimensions of larger ideas, never returns to its original size. ~Oliver Wendell Holmes
:iconbouncingroundtheroom:
I...love this...I think i might have to favorite it. It's very fitting for what I've somewhat recently been through, and I must say you did a very good job of expressing the vulnerability that a person feels in this situation. The length was perfect, too...

"I want to be beside you, want to feel your breath on skin
(for it is only when I know you are real that Eros may begin)."

LOVE.

I also really like the way you ended each stanza, and the way they tied together. Wonderful poem!

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Give me life. Give me pain.
Give me my
Self again.

I'm addressing you. Are you going to let your emotional life be run by Time Magazine?
:iconbeccc:
This is great, well done!
:iconmaetoile:
This is beautiful...scared of doing, yes I know that feeling and you have explained it so eloquently and with intelligence...well done! x

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What oft was thought but ne'er so well expressed...
:iconcryingpain:
Wow a very touching and beautiful poem I can relate to this :)

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:frail:Every artist was first an amateur - 'Ralph Waldo Emerson':frail:

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